Hi DasMaster, I don't know if you'll see this, but I'm a native English speaker from America and I'm 100% willing to edit the English to be more natural. I can't do any actual translations, but I can definitely fix the grammar errors in your translations and make it flow better. I see a lot of potential in this game and I think a lot of that potential can be realized with better English. Let me know if you're interested!
This could be an excellent game. So much potential. Bad grammar and spelling lower the overall quality of the game.
Also, its really slow in slowing. Now that could be due to my os etc but 99% of all others games have no trouble loading.
If I had the time I would offer myself as the text editor on this game for this episode.
And it the dev is interested he can contact me. And then maybe we can talk about the other episodes.
This is a good story.
I wanted to like this game but the grammar and English is so bad i could not keep playing. Really need a good English speaking editor to help you out with this.
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I am having the same problem as the other android users. I go to enter my name and I can't continue
Same
I think the bad english is kinda funny.
On android I press enter when selecting the name and it doesnt procced
unplayable due to the extreme bad English
Hi DasMaster, I don't know if you'll see this, but I'm a native English speaker from America and I'm 100% willing to edit the English to be more natural. I can't do any actual translations, but I can definitely fix the grammar errors in your translations and make it flow better. I see a lot of potential in this game and I think a lot of that potential can be realized with better English. Let me know if you're interested!
This could be an excellent game. So much potential. Bad grammar and spelling lower the overall quality of the game. Also, its really slow in slowing. Now that could be due to my os etc but 99% of all others games have no trouble loading. If I had the time I would offer myself as the text editor on this game for this episode. And it the dev is interested he can contact me. And then maybe we can talk about the other episodes. This is a good story.
Xerxes.
I wanted to like this game but the grammar and English is so bad i could not keep playing. Really need a good English speaking editor to help you out with this.
So every time I would try and input my name when starting it, it would delete what I entered and go with the default. I'm playing on android.
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OW MY ASS